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you said you loved me
and will keep me happy forever
before the end of the dream
you have promised
that tomorrow night
an engagement ring will be on my finger
the morning sun blushing my cheek
wake me up for work
I could not pay attention on anything
unbearable of waiting for the night to come
but night after night has passed
wandering and searching for you with hope
at the end
just me and my expectations
I keep convincing my self every night
to dream and dream again
but
all the dream broke before dawn
before the ring attached on my finger
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Very beautifully written… It sent a chill down my spine…
So hauntingly beautiful…the emotion expressed will be felt by many hearts who know the feelings shared within the life of the words. It does taste of sadness but even in love there are those moments, and yet many more will come that shall take the darkness away with glowing smiles of happiness! Your words are always so very meaningful dear sister! Great poem…God bless!
Superb poem,well expressed. Thank you for liking (Authentic Responsibility ) l value your encouraging comment.Respect and warm wishes.jalal
With pleasure.
Many blessings,
mei
Beautifully written Mei.
Always love to hear from you dear Lu Ann, Thank you so much and have a lovely day.
Hugs,
mei
Great write!
Nice until you wake up & realize the reality.
Thanks dear Rosy.
Hugs,
mei
The poem has a touch of sadness, but well written, dear Meiro!
Thank you for sharing!
Have a wonderful day and many blessings!
With love,
Stefania!
Thank you for reading Stefania.
Have a wonderful day.
Hugs with love,
mei
Mei,
If sadness can be beautiful…, this is. You draw the reader into the romance, the hopes, dreams, and finally into the heart-breaking sorrow. ~peace and love~
Paul
Peace and love to you too dear friend.
Many blessings,
mei
captivating image to match such such emotional words ~ a sadness — broken dreams … beautiful sobering work Mei ~ sending love to you dear friend, Robyn
Thank you dear Robyn, sending you big hugs and love.
mei
Sadly, this happens all too frequently…
It is… indeed.
Thank you John and have a wonderful day.
*sigh* .. Have a wonderful day
Same to you.
Best regards,
mei
sweet lines of sadness
Ya it is. Thank you dear Soumyave.
Hugs,
mei