leaves are seared
stems are dry up
making the trees
looks bowed shame
water is dripping
out of nowhere
perhaps it’s from the moon
which is crying
stars are dims
lost of passion
maybe they are bored
darkness
everywhere
barrenness
no sign of life
as if all were silent
so quiet
am I alone
and
where is the sun
will it rise
will it shine
for I would know
where am I
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Fantastic write and the image is stunning
Thank you so much for the nice comment.
Be blessed.
The picture is quite haunting. There is a hesitancy yet fearlessness I read from this, quite the intriguing imagery! enjoy the potluck! 🙂
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Thank you dear.
I think that your English, as well as the words you chose and the picture you created really made this poem fantastic. Keep writing, that was great!
Thank you for your nice comment and also the support.
All blessings.
lovely piece of poetry i found your blog from a comment you put on another comment. from kevin keep writing lovely words.
I appreciate for your visit and the nice comment Kevin
Very chilling–lovely word choice. The mood is conveyed very well. I like this
Thank you so much for your nice comment.
All blessings to you.
You did well with this one. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Andy.
Haunting and the atmosphere was composed beautifully with verse and picture.
Thank you so much for the nice comment Andy.
English as a second language translates well for you. Enjoy reading your work.
I am Indonesian actually and my English is not good but I hope the readers could understand.
Thank you for such a nice comment.
Be blessed.
Haunting, beautiful. I would never have thought of stars as bored. So interesting. Well done and thanks for stopping by to visit me. I have not had time to visit as many blogs as I wanted to, there are so many really wonderful writers. But my schedule is calmer soon so hopefully I can read more. I would like to read more of yours, for sure. Hugs,pat
Its true so many wonderful writers difficult to choose the good one.
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perfect wording…
smiles.
A++
Thanks for linking.
Thanks to you too for allowing me to participated.
Mysti and magnificant in its way … the idea of stars being bored, for example. Imaginative and inventive.
I am always enchanted by your theme. Lovely.
Thanks for the sweet comment Jamie.
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Meiro,
This is intense girl! Somewhat dark and very powerful..
The Sun will shine apparently- only a matter of time really.. 🙂
Thank you for your words at my site.
Many Hugs xoxo
Thank you to you too Olivia
Be blessed.
The Sun will rise and shine! Very beautiful. Loved coming to your blog.
Thank you so much.
Thank you dear and thanks for stopping by.
Hugc
Nice personification, assigning emotion to aspects of nature.
Thank you for visited.
Beautiful poem. How sad that we can feel this way at times. Blessings to you, Meiro…
Thank you so much Carol.
All the best to you.
Beautiful poem, beautiful blog… I really like!
Thank you so much, I am glad you like my blog.