*
blue eyes
you were present when the sleep almost end
when the dawn coming to drag the night
when the dew falling on the thirsty grass
letting this self swinging in hope
*
blue eyes
your stare is so soothing
as if dripping the passion on the days
and moistening the arid of elapsed time
then pulled to the edge of passion
*
blue eyes
you were gone when the dream is not over
leave the unattainable desires
as the unfulfilled hunger
such as flowers wilted before growing
*
blue eyes
you create a floating tempest
can not be touched but could be felt
created a sign on the burrows of hope
to be back to the dream about you
***
– mei
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Hi it’s me, I am also visiting this web site daily, this web site is truly fastidious and the users are really sharing good thoughts.
When something as your poem is this beautiful and exquisite, what words can one muster to speak? As your words brightly shine, so you the creator share the same quality for being one, you are both treasured jewels! Very mesmerizing and uplifting Me!
I think in dreams we see further into the Blue eyes
and reflect what they are all about..
you write withs uch heart language Mei…
I enjoy wandering with you on your journeys of memories…
Thank you
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maryrose
No doubt they’re beautiful eyes but the way you’ve painted them adds to their beauty…
Peace & Light
Thank you Mira.
Best wishes,
mei
Very beautiful poem! Thank you so much for sharing with us.
Have a wonderful day and a wonderful weekend, dear meiro!
With love,
Stefania! 🙂
You too my dear friend.
With love,
mei
Blue Eyes, …you create a beautiful black hole among the stars and universe that always draws me in; and holds me for a minute or two.
Ms. Mei, THANK YOU for the blog nomination. It humbles and embarrasses me in that yours is so much more deserving of a recognition like this then mine about my family. AND THEN, as I scrolled down your blog to get tot he award, I saw you nominated me for your previous award, that I didn’t know about! Bless you! It seems my work is cut out for me this weekend. Thank you my friend!
I was amazed by the love and warmth in your family and in my opinion it is good to be as an example. But it’s up to you my friend .
Thank you so much and take care.
Best wishes,
mei
I am thinking of away to incorporate both award responsibilities as we speak. I see you have all your STARS and I am not quite sure +9what is expected as far as getting the stars goes. But I will try to make you proud!
Reblogged this on meiro and commented:
Last night when I trace back my blog …. I found this poem which written on last February and I want to share with you…hope you like it.
Happy reading!
Love the imagery ..the great thing about poetry is that it can create a detailed picture or it can leave huge swathes vague with meanings to be filled in by the reader.
I am enjoying your use of imagery. With poetry one can paint the detailed picture, or one can leave entire thought patterns entirely vague and multi-dimensional.
I agree with you.
Thank you so much for your kindly comments, I really appreciated.
Blessings.
you write such poignant poems….striking….soothing….it is really a beautiful blog
It’s just slipped out of my heart and thoughts.
Hope the visitors would like it.
wow …..speachless
Thanks my friend.
Beautiful poem. Love the imagery. Loving your blog.
You have a lovely blog too, and the poetry… it’s beautiful
Blessed be