I dance while crying in the rain
hoping this faith will no longer tempted
by a momentary lust
I dance while crying in the rain
wishing for no more mistakes
caused by worldly vices
I dance while crying in the rain
hope that body and soul will cleaned
of disgraceful thoughts and actions
when the rain stops
the wishes gone
I did not became clean
even
wallowed in the mud of dilapidation
m e i r o 
puisi yang bagus bunda 🙂
Senang menerima anda disini dan terima kasih atas kunjungannya.
Thank you Jani, I really appreciate.
Ibu Meiro, this is a very good poem. Something struck my mind, though, “The moment I strive becoming an angel, I cease from living. The moment I strive becoming a human, I start living.”-would you agree?
Subhan Zein
Ya, it proves how weak we are as human being.
I am happy to have you here Pak Subhan we can share although “jauh dimata dekat dihati” he he he.
Take care.
I love that line – “I dance while crying in the rain.”
I also love your last line.
The effect is sad, but wonderful.
Ya, I love it too,
Dancing and crying in the rain – I’ve done it sometime ago….so wonderful, difficult to forget.
very meaningfull lines after long time you wrote and it is too good .some time momentry lust contrl us and in time of our weekness sinfull thaughts disturb . it is not sin but it is proof that we are human being .
keep it up Dear Mie