if yes is the answer

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Let me be the verses of love

to be with you in solitude

and fill the lonely nights

with dreams

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Let me be the verses of life

to wet the barren of your hope

and strengthen the fragile soul

with confidence Ā 

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let me be the verses of song

to entertain the sadness

and lifted your passion

through the tones

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take me

if yes is the answer

in your memory

in your heart

in your days

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– mei –

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30 thoughts on “if yes is the answer

  1. Yup, my dear Meiro – loving the passion and this really hits the spot… ‘take me’ indeed!

    As a kindred poet, both in word and soul, a couple of tweaks to suggest here (around tenses etc.) ‘wets’ should be ‘wet’ I think? and ‘lifted’ be ‘lift’? Also reckon ‘barren’ needs a noun as well – something like ‘echo’ maybe? Or whatever seems right to you… Look forward to that and continuing our creative dialogue.

    With Love & Light Scott x

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