close your eyes for a moment
take a deep breath
carefully hear it
the soul of your femininity is whispering
please realize that you are beautiful as a rose
feel the fragrant and spread it
show the beautiful color with proud
but hide your thorns if not necessary
let the vision be the guidance
allow the mission to clear your path
as you step boldly for being a wonderful woman
you’ve been created for life’s sweetness and bitterness
and ready to jump over the obstacles
again…., take a deep breath
you are lovely as butterfly
feel the beauty of the wings
keep up to always be strong
to fly if you were not appreciated nor respected
and inappropriate to be underestimated
you are so valuable
now…. open your eyes
it’s time to live it with confidence
but fly away….
if you’re self-esteem was trampled
– mei –
29 thoughts on “the whisper of femininity”
A true message with such delicacy and grace. Thank you.
Thank you so much for coming by my friend, have a nice day.
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Thank you Paul, thank you so much.
the duality is everywhere, there a male in every female and there is a female hidden in every male, how to see and feel it matters.
I was not talking about duality in here. The poem written based to arbitrary actions and violence against women is often the case, especially in Indonesia. 🙂
women are being exploited since long, i feel lets take a resolve that this century is dedicated to the one’s who bring life on earth.
Thank you Mei, such a heart warming poem, had a sweet smile on my face as I write this!
Much love to you:)
Wish I could see that smile 🙂
I wish you could!!
Like this one, Mei, but somehow, being a man, I really can’t relate to it. Ha!
It’s a rebellion of my femininity’s soul to violence against women which lately happened in Indonesiat which mostly carried out by own husbands.
I understand and appreciate your opinion Paul.
Awe inspiring! Good one!
Also, let me know what you think about my work ‘final destination’
It’s so lovely!
The chain of love and longing strongly bind the soul to find his true love even had to wait in decades.
Why didn’t it posted in your wp blog, sometimes some visitors are reluctant if have to go to another link.
Thank U 🙂 I usually publish there, that’s why 🙂
Another beautiful post. Happily feminine… comfortably feminine… all women should believe in their beauty and reach this state of peace and comfort with themselves. Very nice indeed!
You are so right MJ, many thanks.
Something like this should be read in the morning to add different colours to the day that is about to follow. Thank you, Mei. Love, Ese
You are right, I agree.
A very awesome and lovely poem, sister Mei! May God continue you to bless you this new year, as your poems just get better each day!
Your words brighter my Sunday Wendell, thank you.
Love to you,
Mei this a beauty celebration of femininity. More please, if I may be so bold 🙂
You have lifted my spirits Lee, thanks.
Still a very great post. Your message touched my soul again, dear Meiro! The image is so delicate!
Thank you so much for sharing!
Be Blessed with happiness!
Have a great weekend!
Same to you my dear friend.
But wouldn’t be better to stand your ground and not allow your self-estemem to be even toyed with much less trampled? >KB